Trying
to keep up with how Behn writes is hard work for my eyes because of the small
print and large paragraphs. Yet, it is easier to understand compared to Paradise Lost, which had my brain doing
circles and criss-cross patterns every time. From what I’ve read so far, it is
a very interesting story, but I find that I’m not drawn into it like I was with
previous things we’ve read. I don’t know if it’s a combination of her writing
style and characters, but I feel it lacks something.
I’m
probably the only one who thinks so, but I can rock the lone wolf deal. Yet,
there are certain excerpts that I find rather curious. The first was Behn’s
description of the Prince on page 2187. He seems to be a well-raised, educated
and intelligent young man from the description. His physical appearance is
flawless and striking against the rest of his people. He is full of vitality
and an inspiration for the men around him.
When
it says, “His eyes were the most awful that could be seen, and very piercing,
the white of ‘em being like snow, as were his teeth” (2187) I was stopped by
the word awful. How can someone’s eyes be awful? It is an unusual description for
humans eyes because most writers use adjectives like beautiful, mesmerizing,
otherworldly, never awful.
If
I could guess, I think she describes his eyes this way because of their experiences,
knowledge and ability to see through you. Nothing could be hidden from the
Prince because he saw and understood everything going on around him. He spoke
English and Spanish so he could communicate with the white people besides his
own kind. Since he started young as a fighter, the things he experienced and
saw probably shaped him on the inside and sometimes shine through his eyes.
It
can intimidating to look at someone who you know has more knowledge and skill
than you. You fear their criticism and judgment because you are just trying to
get through the day. The people in his town or village may have seen him in
this light, besides respecting and looking up to him. The Prince certainly
sounds like a fearsome thing to behold. With his strong personality and
impeccable character, he is a man’s man. Just his description intimidates me a
bit. He seems to be very accomplished at a young age and knows who he is.
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